IELTS-writing exercise Expository_Text_13

动态图表+如何分段

Q: The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

IELTS-writing exercise Expository_Text_13

首段

改写题目

The bar chart compares five major cities in terms of the changes in the cost of an average house pver a period of 13 years.

主体部分第一段(从London开始说起,然后说New York,两个城市第二个时间段的增长很大)

最高值是London

Between 1996 and 2002, London saw the bigest increase in housing prices of these cities(over 10%), despite a drop of around 7% in the previousperiod.

然后说New York

The figure for New York showed a similar pattern, declining by 5% during the first five year periodbut rising by 5% in the following 6 years.

主体部分第二段(然后描述Tokyo,下降一直很大)

Tokyo

Tokyo was the only city where the average house price dropped in both periods, around 7% in the five years and then another 5%.

主体部分第三段(描述其他的城市)

Madrid and Frankfurt的第一个阶段

The costs of an average home in both Madrid and Frankfurt climbed before the year 1996, 1% and 2% respectively.

第二个阶段

While prices in Madrid increased even faster over the six years after 1995, the growth in the housing market of Frankfurt slowed to approximately 1%.

总结段

总结趋势和主要特征

Overall, the property prices in London and NewYork were volatile during the 13-year period, in contrast to the consistently rising prices in Madrid and Frankfurt. Tokyo’s houses were increasingly affordable.

学习点-分段

图表作文的开头段一般独立一段,然后下面主体段分为2~3段,最后一段是结尾段

主体部分的分段原则

  1. 单图/表按对象分段。
  2. 多图/表如果单位一致,描述的对象一致,那么当作单图/表来看,按照对象分段。
  3. 单图/表如果单位不一致,描述的对象不一致,那么按照图/表来分段。
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